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雅思英語作文:新東方老師談句型的運用
句子也是如此,我們提倡簡煉,但不是說都用簡單句。有人認為在寫作考試中,采用簡單句、短句、容易掌握,不在會出錯,因而也最保險。這話沒有錯,但簡單句用得太多,造成簡單句的堆徹實際上是語言技巧不成熟、不老練,甚至語言水平低下的表現(xiàn)。在閱卷人員看來,同樣的意思內(nèi)容,一個考生能夠運用比較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)來表達,其語言水平當(dāng)然要比只會用簡單句來表達的考生的語言水平高出一截,就是有點錯也不妨礙他比后者取得較高的分數(shù),因為他的難度系數(shù)要高。在某種意義上來說,在詞數(shù)相同的作文中,語言水平越高,語言技巧越熟練,句子的數(shù)目也就越少。這就意味著句子長了,句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜了。
當(dāng)然,我們反對過多地使用簡單句并不是鼓勵學(xué)生去刻意追求長句、復(fù)雜句。我們追求的是句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多變。一篇文章能根據(jù)表達的內(nèi)容使用不同的句子結(jié)構(gòu),會產(chǎn)生較好的藝術(shù)效果。
例1
The Career I Pursue的主體段:
A variety of reasons have led me to choose this occupation over other more lucrative ones. First,teaching is learning. To make my lectures more interesting, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world—the very thing I like to do in my life. Second, teaching means freedom. As a teacher, I can freely express my opinions and explain them in my own way since nobody will interfere with me. Finally, I like teaching because it offers a certain peace of mind. No more rushing to catching a morning bus, no more anxiety to please a boss, and no more worries about being laid off because you are getting old.
文中有4個詞的短句First,teaching is learning.也有27個詞的長句To make my lectures more interesting,I have to read more books,explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world—the very thing I like to do in my life.有簡單句,也有復(fù)雜句As a teacher,I can freely express my opinions and explain them in my own way since nobody will interfere with me;還有同位語句,斷裂句,排比句,比較句等,因而文章讀起來節(jié)奏感強。所謂句子變化,主要是指句子的開頭要有變化,句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要有變化,句子的長度要有變化。不要連續(xù)使用幾個簡單句,要學(xué)會使用復(fù)雜句。
例2
a)Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty.
b)Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smok
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