高考英語作文真題點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　以下是小編準(zhǔn)備的高考英語作文真題點(diǎn)評(píng)，歡迎閱讀。

　　【全國卷II】

　　【試題回放】

　　一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：

　　1.地點(diǎn)：距白山入口處500米;

　　2.房間及價(jià)格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;

　　3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);

　　4.游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開放;

　　5.歡迎預(yù)定。

　　注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

　　500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

　　Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文開門見山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確�？偟貋碚f，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯(cuò)的滿分作文。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞　1. provide v.提供 2. convenience n.便利

　　好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

　　very enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會(huì)給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。

　　評(píng)析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

　　【湖北卷】

　　【試題回放】假設(shè)你是卜曼宜，你購買了一部某外國公司生產(chǎn)的手機(jī)，因有質(zhì)量問題，要求該公司更換。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文寫一封電子郵件。

　　要點(diǎn)：1. 問題：手機(jī)不響鈴，不能發(fā)短信;該產(chǎn)品已售完，無法更換;型號(hào)新，無配件，無法維修。2. 要求：公司應(yīng)盡快予以更換。

　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)為100左右;

　　2. 參考詞匯：配件—— spare part;

　　3. 電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好(不計(jì)入你所寫詞數(shù));

　　4.已給出的電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。

　　Dear Sir，

　　I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

　　Thank you for your consideration.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Bu Manyi

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全，語言豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，如頭兩句說明了購買手機(jī)后發(fā)現(xiàn)故障的情況，中間部分說明了無法維修而必須讓公司更換手機(jī)的原委，最后明確提出自己的要求，明白流暢，將題目所提出的要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)清楚，較好的完成了任務(wù)。全文以一般過去時(shí)為基調(diào)，結(jié)合主動(dòng)語態(tài)與被動(dòng)語態(tài)，并使用了so, but, therefore 等連接詞，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整嚴(yán)密。固定短語，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的語言顯得地道而精煉。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.絕望的 3. consideration n.體諒

　　好句To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

　　令我失望的是，他說因?yàn)樵谥袊�是新款手機(jī)，所以沒有配件來修理。

　　評(píng)析：復(fù)雜句的組織; to my disappointment, 常用短語。

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