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篇一:英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)大全
一、 宏觀性評(píng)價(jià)
1.整體印象類評(píng)語(yǔ)
Super!Excellent!Perfect!Wonderful!Fantastic!Marvelous!
采用整體印象類評(píng)語(yǔ)對(duì)于起始階段的學(xué)生有較好的激勵(lì)作用,但若千篇一律使用此類評(píng)語(yǔ),就會(huì)使學(xué)生無(wú)法正確認(rèn)識(shí)自己的寫作水平,最終導(dǎo)致教師的評(píng)語(yǔ)失去應(yīng)有的作用。
2.規(guī)范導(dǎo)知類評(píng)語(yǔ)
Beautiful.Clear. Wonderful.Good hand-writing.
You’re careful of using pronunciation.
Glad to see your improvement in handwriting.
I’m expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time. You’d better pay more attention to word order.
Better be more careful of your spelling.
It’s important to compose a graft beforehand.
3.情感調(diào)控類評(píng)語(yǔ)
I appreciate your handwriting.
You have a good knowledge of English proverbs.
You are quite aware of making meaningful sentences.
You are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences and idioms.
I’m expecting greater progress from you in writing .Come on.
If you need my help,never hesitate to come to me.
警句:
Hard work leads to success.
Not to advance is to go back.
No one is without faults.
Keeping is harder than winning.Keep it up.
二、 微觀寫作技能方面的評(píng)語(yǔ)
1.專項(xiàng)點(diǎn)撥類評(píng)語(yǔ)
It’s proper to use the proverb in Para.2 quite clever.
You are good at using attributive clauses in your writing.
The “struck” sentence is perfectly used.
You’d better use “third person” in the first para.
It’s good to use the past tense in your writing.
2.佳句欣賞類評(píng)語(yǔ)
教師可以在句尾統(tǒng)一標(biāo)注贊美性的符號(hào)(如E—Excellent)或標(biāo)識(shí)不同星級(jí)等。
What a wonderful sentence using “cover”.
It’s really clever of you to use this beautiful sentence.
The inverted sentence is well wtitten.
3.謀篇布局類評(píng)語(yǔ)
A good beginning.
A perfect ending.
Well-organized. Perfectly-expanded.
The first para. makes a good beginning.
The last para. makes a perfect ending.
All the points have been covered.
It’s clever of you to use a topic sentence at the beginning of a para. It’s wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences.
You are good at developing para.
You have made great progress in developing passage.
I am glad to see the sentence conherence in your last para.
Better pay more attention to the relationship between sentences. It’s really wonderful to start/end your sentences with adverbials.
在起始年級(jí)應(yīng)側(cè)重對(duì)學(xué)生寫作行為規(guī)范的引領(lǐng),重在對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行詞語(yǔ)方面的引導(dǎo);對(duì)高年級(jí)學(xué)生則應(yīng)側(cè)重對(duì)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)、行文的邏輯、句子的變化等方面的指點(diǎn)和引導(dǎo)。
雖然這些評(píng)語(yǔ)對(duì)我們大部分學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)不太適合,以為他們連老師評(píng)他們什么都看不懂,但我們平時(shí)對(duì)作文的批改確實(shí)沒(méi)做到這么仔細(xì),有很大啟發(fā)。
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