高考滿分作文回顧(2)

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高考滿分作文回顧(2)

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

高考滿分作文回顧(2)

　　好詞

　　1.promote v .促進(jìn) 2. interpersonal adj.人際的3. generation gap. 代溝4. open-minded adj. 虛心的

　　好句

　　1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

　　同學(xué)之間應(yīng)該互相傾聽(tīng)，這樣他們可以互相學(xué)習(xí)和幫助，也會(huì)形成友誼。

　　評(píng)析：復(fù)雜句的組合，被動(dòng)句的使用。

　　2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.

　　我想強(qiáng)調(diào)的是我們每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該更多的傾聽(tīng)他人。

　　評(píng)析：復(fù)合句的使用。

　　【北京卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為校刊英語(yǔ)園地寫(xiě)一篇題為“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準(zhǔn)備春游到春游結(jié)束的完整過(guò)程。

　　注意：詞數(shù)不少于60.

　　提示詞：游樂(lè)園 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin

　　Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

　　The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

　　We were tired but happy.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本情景作文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.討論;2.爬山;3.檢拾別人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。本文覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。其中，寫(xiě)作主題突出，詳略得當(dāng)，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，而且有效的使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文機(jī)構(gòu)緊湊。本文敘述清楚，描寫(xiě)細(xì)致，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用了很多富有表現(xiàn)力的詞和句型，例如：“set off early”，“enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were shocked to see litter here and there “等，將活動(dòng)的情形很形象地描述了出來(lái)。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞

　　1 set off 出發(fā) 2. litter n.廢棄物 3.respectively adv.分別地

　　好句

　　1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view .

　　在爬山時(shí)，我們享受著溫暖的陽(yáng)光和美麗的風(fēng)景。

　　1. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.

　　然而，當(dāng)我們登上山頂，被眼前的一幕驚呆了：瓶子和香蕉皮這樣的廢棄物到處都是。

　　評(píng)析：細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)，生動(dòng)形象�！皊hock”一詞也用得生動(dòng)傳神。

　　【湖北卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　假設(shè)你是卜曼宜，你購(gòu)買(mǎi)了一部某外國(guó)公司生產(chǎn)的手機(jī)，因有質(zhì)量問(wèn)題，要求該公司更換。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。

　　要點(diǎn)：1. 問(wèn)題：手機(jī)不響鈴，不能發(fā)短信;該產(chǎn)品已售完，無(wú)法更換;型號(hào)新，無(wú)配件，無(wú)法維修。 2. 要求：公司應(yīng)盡快予以更換。

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數(shù)為100左右;

　　2. 參考詞匯：配件—— spare part;

　　3. 電子郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好(不計(jì)入你所寫(xiě)詞數(shù));

　　4.已給出的電子郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。

　　Dear Sir，

　　I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

　　Thank you for your consideration.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Bu Manyi

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，如頭兩句說(shuō)明了購(gòu)買(mǎi)手機(jī)后發(fā)現(xiàn)故障的情況，中間部分說(shuō)明了無(wú)法維修而必須讓公司更換手機(jī)的原委，最后明確提出自己的要求，明白流暢，將題目所提出的要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)清楚，較好的完成了任務(wù)。全文以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為基調(diào)，結(jié)合主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)與被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，并使用了so, but, therefore 等連接詞，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整嚴(yán)密。固定短語(yǔ)，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的語(yǔ)言顯得地道而精煉。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞

　　1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.絕望的3. consideration n.體諒

　　好句

　　To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

　　令我失望的是，他說(shuō)因?yàn)樵谥袊?guó)是新款手機(jī)，所以沒(méi)有配件來(lái)修理。

　　評(píng)析：復(fù)雜句的組織; to my disappointment, 常用短語(yǔ)。

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